Hello Everyone,
I am my own worst credic, it is sad to say but it is the truth! i don't mind peer reviews, I know that I am harder on myself then anyone else is going to be. ( maybe) I think that thay are helpful, I mean when some reads what you have written and comments on it you should be greatful that they took the time, they are just giveing you their thoughts, and trying to help you to improve things. I didn't have any Ah ha moments I struggled with this paper and I am not sure why I really like this topic. there is so much information to go through maybe that is why I struggled, I wanted to write a good paper that flowed nicely but I think that it is just stiff and full of facts. The thing that I find to be the most intersting is that there are so many mentally ill people that are in the prison system. I really feel sad knowing that, becouse they have felt that way for so long that they have never sot out any real treatment, also the cost to get treatment is not always cheap.

hello everyone,

over the past six weeks I have enjoied this class. I do enjoy writting and I have enjoied learning these things all over again. I do not like the out line process I think that it is confussing to me I am not sure why it is but it is. I like doing the free writting thing, I enjoy it alot. This week I celabrated my 32nd birthday. it was actully saturday. I have not really enjoied that part of my life but I did have a great day and I am very greatful for everyday that I am alive. I am looking foward to contuning my education, I am really enjoying my time with the on-line classes. blogging is something that I may keep doing I like, I think that it is a great way to express your self. I think that this topic is a great topic, it is very debatable. Mental Illness is something that can be treated but unless they take the medication and stay on track with the treatment, they may be more likely to fall back into their old patterans. I have lots of ideas when it comes to this topic its just figuering out how to make a paper out of it before I can do anything else.

I think that the writting styles that I use the most of are free writthing and brainstorming. they are kind of the same thing in the since that they both require you just to write one is more like topica or quisteans and the other is almost like writting a rough draft of a paper. eather way I really like the way things end up for me. I also like to make pro con lists when I write it helps me to narrow things down alot. I really miss writting. I like this class becouse it gives us a chance to get in touch with it again. I think that the styles that I chose say that I am not always one for structure in my life I like to change things I think to much and its like my brain just goes sometimes its really hard to slow down. school in its self has always been a challange for me, I wouldn't say that I am ADD however I do struggle with not being able to concentrate sometimes. School is helpping me to learn that I don't have to settle for things in life, it is helping me to want more out of my life. not that working as a fastfood manager is a bad thing but I want to help people not just fix the mistakes with their order. I am very excited for the future.

I think that it is very important to give credit to those who write the articals that we use to write are papers. I think that we are all smart. when we use additional recorses to write things then we have to give credit to those who deserve it. Writting is fun and can be a great way to express ourselves. If I had written something and someone used it and didn't give me credit, I may be upseat however I would get over it pretty quickly. things just dont seem to bather me all that much. I deffently think that the internet makes plagerisum a bit more challanging as well as making the lines of ownership a lot more bulry. in the same case if you dont want every one to look at, see, and or mimic you then it may be best to keep thing off the internet. even though we all enjoy a good laugh.