Saturday, June 26, 2010

Hello Everyone,
I am my own worst credic, it is sad to say but it is the truth! i don't mind peer reviews, I know that I am harder on myself then anyone else is going to be. ( maybe) I think that thay are helpful, I mean when some reads what you have written and comments on it you should be greatful that they took the time, they are just giveing you their thoughts, and trying to help you to improve things. I didn't have any Ah ha moments I struggled with this paper and I am not sure why I really like this topic. there is so much information to go through maybe that is why I struggled, I wanted to write a good paper that flowed nicely but I think that it is just stiff and full of facts. The thing that I find to be the most intersting is that there are so many mentally ill people that are in the prison system. I really feel sad knowing that, becouse they have felt that way for so long that they have never sot out any real treatment, also the cost to get treatment is not always cheap.

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  1. It was a great topic that you chose! I am having a hard time writing my paper, because there are information, probably too much that need to be cut out. I think it's great to just narrow it down, but still struggling as to what. Good luck!

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